Poetry Workshop

by Drora Matlofsky

1.
What is wrong with this poem?

... Don't say 'higher', say 'loftier'...
... Take out the -ings, use shorter words...
... Too many repetitions, find a better rhyme...

What's wrong?
You can't see the poem for the words.

2.
Paradoxical papyrus, quavering, hieroglyphic
Parallel paragraph, diaphanous and elliptic
Paramount parasite, unsolicited rhinitis
Paranoid pontiff, apocalyptic metamorphosis

What?
You can't see the poem for the words.




ABOUT THE POET ~
Drora Matlofsky has been living in Jerusalem since 1984. Her poetry in English has appeared in various poetry and Jewish magazines and her poetry in French can be found on the Poésie Française site.


Last updated September 28, 2015